feedback

Yesterday we did monlogues for the afternoon and then did it infront of my tutor and got some feedback from it which where

1. To get my tougue around the words so aka punction again so  i jusy need to keep saying the words and make sure i can speak them proubly
2. and to put in some pauses
3. and look at the blocking a tiny bit where i say " for her hairy temples had rounded" where i might want to bend down there instead of "stood within"

So I'm going to look at my script again look at what i can make better blocking, jesting, body movement, where I look and where I move and where Titina and Bottom are has well has Puck.